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I'm a creative writing student and this blog is a place for me to post what I've written. I was fifteen when I first wrote some of these, I'm 21 now and have (hopefully) improved somewhat! Please feel free to comment and critique.

Wednesday, 25 January 2012

Back then
the months would crowd into minutes.
Each night
blasting past
faster than the last
like tube trains
hurtling in the underground.

Safe inside
weary workers flicked
sharp glances
at dreaming passengers.
"Tickets?"

Tick.

Time dripped to the
track from the
fuel tank.

I earned a tick for
Every second spent alive.
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      • I Am Not a Robot
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